Wednesday, April 6, 2011

Writing

This is a story Mia wrote when she was in First Grade and 6 years old. (Original spelling and grammer.)
Lilly, the Fish


Lilly is a light blue and light pink fish. She lives in the ocean. She is going on a adventure. She swims to a lake. She swims by the airport. There is a oil spill. Lilly turns black. She swims to the park. People have littered. She swims past a factory. Poisons have got dumped in the water. Lilly's tale is green. Lilly swims more and finds clean water.